修改英语小短文

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这片英语小短文，关于青少年视力问题的，说是有的同学在很暗的地方看书、在日照强烈的地方看书、吃饭的时候或躺在床上看书、走路看书，坐姿不正的看书，因此学生视力下降。你作为一名学生向报社的编辑投稿.这是我写的，请帮我看看，那些地方写错了！！！谢谢
Editor,
Hello!I'm a student ,i have some questions to talk with you. I always find some students have eyesights problems .But we all are know that students should study hard,so they must read more books frequently.But they read under a very bright sunshine or at night without light.And they read on the table and on the bed.The eye expert also tell us that we couldn't read by this way.If you always do this ,and for a long time,your eyesight will down.
Editor please concentrate on students and help them.

Editor,
Hello!I'm a student ,i have some questions to talk with you. I find some students have eyesights problems .But we all are know that students have to study hard,so they must read many books frequently.But they read under a very bright sunshine or at night if there is no light.And they read on the table or in the bed.The eye expert have also told us that we musn't read like this ,oherwise,your eyesight will down.
Editor please concentrate on us students and help us.
sincely
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我大概改了一下。
Dear Editor,
Hello!I'm a student ,i have some questions to discuss with you. I always find some students have eyesights problems .But we all know that students should study hard,so they must read more books frequently.But they read under the bright sunshine or at night without light.And they read on the table and on the bed.The eye expert also tell us that we couldn't read by this way.If we alw