英语高手回来下。、

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/18 14:01:50
I am a middle school ,my name is xiao hong.I like learn very much.we are many subjects in school .my favorite sport is tennis.I always play tennis aften class .It is interesting .It is very important and good for my health .
英语高手麻烦帮看下。 有没有哪里写错的?

I am a middle school student. My name is Xiao Hong. I like learning very much. We have many subjects in school. My favorite sport is tennis. I always play tennis after class. It is interesting. It is very important and good for my health.

不妥的地方都改过了。

兄弟好多错误啊...

I am a middle school student,.... I like learning very much. we have many.... i always play tennis after school.....

I am a middle school student!my name is xiao hong !I like learn very much ,We learn many subjects in school!
我是一名初中生,我的名字叫小红!我非常喜欢学习!我在学校学很多科目!我最喜欢的运动是网球!我经常下课打网球!那非常有趣!它对我的身体健康很好很重要!