UC知道急。帮忙改改英文的自我介绍。
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很急呃，所以能帮的人请快。
在线等。
算了。贴出来吧。
Hello everyone.My name is .... of course,this name is so easy to remember.It means ....i don't konw why my mother gave me this name,but i really like it and i think it sounds gerat.
I come from hx middle school.i have already been here for three years.and i hope i will spend many happy hours in this school with eyeryone in our class.
i also have many hobbies.such as playing computer games ,reading japanese comics.i also like watching soccer games,but only watch,not play.and my favorite soccer player is Schweinsteiger.
that's all.thank you.
Hello everyone.My name is .... well,this name is so easy to remember.It means ....i don't konw why my mother gave me this name,but i really like it and i think it sounds cool.
I come from hx middle school.i have been here for three years. i felt truly happy in this school with my classmates. 【不是过去的是吗？】
i also have varied hobbies.such as playing computer games ,reading japanese comics.And i also like watching soccer games,Frankly speaking， only to watch,but not to play.and my favorite soccer player is Schweinsteiger.
thank you.
千万不要在这么正式的场合说that's all 很搞笑的，听起来
老外每次听到这个都笑起没完，等同于你在一段演讲过后说，仅此而已， 或是我说完了
没错，只是建议把倒数第四行的many改成a lot of,因为a lot of通常用于positive statement；而many通常用于negative statement
hello everyone，有点太正经了，如果是在学校直接说hi
......but i really like it and it sounds cool(grate)
i i have been here for three years （ 有了been 就不用already）and hope we have interesting memories with everyone here
I have so m