一篇英文自我介绍，请大家帮忙改改

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Hello, everyone. First let me introduce myself.
My name is Zou Hang. I’m 15 years old. I came from No.45 Middle School（不知道这里用middle school 还是用 junior high school）.
In my spare time, I like reading short English articles and listen to the English songs. I enjoy both of it, because it make me relaxed.Also, English films is my favorite. Sometimes I go to the theater to watch the English films that I like. According to all of this, I have great interested on English.
Sometimes I go to the English Corner to practice my speaking skills, and sometimes I write English letter to my friend. This all because I like English. Though I know my English is not so good, I’ll try my best on it, no matter how difficult it is. I believe that where there is a will, there is a way.
That’s all. Thank you.
是“改”不是“翻译”！！！

Hello, everyone. First let me introduce myself.
My name is Zou Hang. I’m 15 years old. I come from No.45 Middle School.
In my spare time, I like reading short English articles and listen to English songs. I enjoy both of them, because they make me relaxed. Also, English film is my favorite. Sometimes I go to the cinima to watch English films that I like. all in all, I have great interest in English.
Sometimes I go to the English Corner to practice my oral skills, and sometimes I write English letter to my friend. This is all because I like English. Although I know that my English is not so good, I’ll try my best working on it, no matter how difficult it is. I believe that where there is a will, there is a way.
That’s all. Thank you.

你好,每一个人.首先让我介绍一下自己.
我的名字叫邹恒.我15岁.我来自67-89中学(不知道这里用中学还是用初中) .
在我的空余时间,我喜欢读英文短文章,听英文歌曲.我喜欢这两个,因为它使我relaxed.also ,英语影片,是我的最爱.有时我去电影院看英文电影,我很喜欢.根据这一切,我对此有很大的兴趣,对英语.
我有时去英语角练练我的说话技巧,有时,我会写英文信给我的朋友.这一切,因为我喜欢英语.虽然我