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50 years is a very long period for a human life, sure enough a lot of things can change in this time. For example, a young boy will become an old men, he’ll have all his good or bad memories behind him. Most of the old men won’t try to find a new challenge because all of their passions are already gone as the time goes by.
In my point of view, I hope that, when I’ll be nearly 70, my life would be different. I will be full of vitality so that I could make my life more exiting, not just waiting for my death. I could try things new, an activity that I didn’t have the chance to try when I was young.
Even tough that I still don’t know what I will be doing when I get older and what are my goals but I believe that at the age of 70 my dreams will all come true. So in order to make my life special and fulfill I’ll try my best to keep setting new goals when one is achieved.
So whatever I’m going to do and where
第一行： 把什么sure enough改成It's certain that a lot of......
第四行：passions 把s去掉~没有s～不可数，后面的are就改成is了……不过改成has更好些～用完成时态
第二段：
第一行～貌似是From my point of view吧？^^
When I am .... my life will....主将从现原则
第二行：not just wait for....wait和前面的make并列
第四行：even though后面没that
What my goals are 陈述语序，建议改成will be
倒数第二行：fullfiled
第三段：Wherever...
没有了～～～～～～～还好，就是要注意时态，尤其是比较错乱的时候
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50 years is a long time for a people,and it is sure that lots of things can be changed .
a young boy can become an old man.
抱歉呐，完全不知道你在写什么耶，麻烦你写上汉语呗。
How do you imagine yourself in 50 years?
50 years is a very long period for human life. Sure enough a lot of things can change during that time. For example, a young boy will become an old man, he'll have all his good or bad memories behind him. And the old man won't try to find a new challenge because all his passion maybe already b