UC知道跪求各位牛人给小弟批改作文！！！！！！！！！！
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请牛人批改，从语法，逻辑各方面。。拜托了！
15. Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.
In contemporary society, neighbors play pivotal paramount roles in the individual life.Why good neighbors never fail to be welcomed in the communities? There are several qualities that neighbors need to have.
Neighbors should be so kind that can help you when you get into trouble. In daily life, we surely have some problems that we can hardly deal with. Thus, if you have a kind nerghbor who never mind helping you, you will feel that the life is easy. For example,once,you buy a new machine such as refrigerator,but it is too heavy for you to carry. Now,helped by a kind neighbors without paying, you will appreciate him.Therefore,the relationships between neighbors can be enhanced.Then,people's lives become easy.
Neighbors who have the same hobbies as you are also
15. Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.
In contemporary society, neighbors play pivotal paramount roles in the individual life.Why good neighbors never fail to be welcomed in the communities? There are several qualities that neighbors need to have.
Neighbors should be so kind that can help you when you get into trouble. In daily life, we surely have some problems that we can hardly deal with. Thus, if you have a kind nerghbor who never mind helping you, you will feel that the life is easy. For example,once,you buy a new machine such as refrigerator,but it is too heavy for you to carry. Now,helped by a kind neighbors without paying, you will appreciate him.Therefore,the relationships between neighbors can be enhanced.Then,people's lives become easy.
Neighbors who have the same hobbies as you are also
你好像说的是邻居和自己的生活有关吧，呵呵，开始就提到了，人就是住在我们附近的邻居是不哦？再是你对态度好的邻居的意见是什么，后面勉强看的懂吧，但是要批改起来嘛就麻烦了太长了，我只是看到几个地方感觉语法错了，还有个地方不应该是nerghbor，带进句中的时候应该要加S，是复数，后面的嚒我没看，加油吧，我们英语没有那么强悍的，让专家批改吧，我们连文凭都米呢
你去百度搜 吴耀武英语教学网 发到那里让他看吧
写的不错，就是没看懂~
很好，另外
比我好多了
可以到网上去搜：英语网