UC知道一篇文章改错……急！！
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In this set of material, the reading passage introduces the ritualization of animals’ behaviors.
In the lecture, the professor uses an example to demonstrate the theory.
In ancient time, when dog meet threaten, they will show their teeth to bite. At the beginning, they really want to bite the enemies. During the evolution, other animals gradually learn that dogs show their teeth means that they’ll bite. So when they see dogs show their teeth, they’ll escape from dogs. Finally, dogs have learned that they can just use showing teeth as a signal of warning to threaten enemies. Thus, showing their teeth is ritualized. It means that something will offense other things.
这是我翻译的一段有关动物行为仪式化的文章……我知道里头有n多错，哪位高手能给纠纠……感激不尽！！
不要用太难的词，并且最好能在120字左右……
感激不尽！！
In the lecture, the professor uses an example to demonstrate the theory.
In ancient time, when dog meet threaten, they will show their teeth to bite. At the beginning, they really want to bite the enemies. During the evolution, other animals gradually learn that dogs show their teeth means that they’ll bite. So when they see dogs show their teeth, they’ll escape from dogs. Finally, dogs have learned that they can just use showing teeth as a signal of warning to threaten enemies. Thus, showing their teeth is ritualized. It means that something will offense other things.
这是我翻译的一段有关动物行为仪式化的文章……我知道里头有n多错，哪位高手能给纠纠……感激不尽！！
不要用太难的词，并且最好能在120字左右……
感激不尽！！
应该是
1、other animals gradually learned that the dog would bite when they showed their teeth 。
2、Finally, dogs learned that they just need to use showing their teeth as a signal of warning to threaten enemies away.
应该满意吧
条例上，我觉得你写的很清楚，我也看懂了。语法上真的没有错误。词汇上这么表达也可以。
赞一个，已经很不错了。