UC知道剑桥4 test1 writing task1 帮忙改错 谢谢
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According to the information given in the table,we can find that up to 21% of family with sole parents,taking the first place.Family which consist of single and no children saw 19%,filling the second position.It is noticeable that the proportion of people from household which is made up of couple with children(12%) was 2 times as many as family with single aged person(6%).Aged people were generally less likely to be poor,due to the fact that aged couple family living in poverty account for only 4%.And the percentage of individuals from family with couple had no children occupy 7% in Australia in 1999.
Overall,it is obvious that people from family with children is more likely to living in poverty.
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The table illustrates the percentage of different types of impoverished household in Australia in 1999.
According to the information given in the table,we can find that up to 21% of family(改families) with sole parents,taking(改took) the first place.Family(改families) which consist(改consisted) of single and no children saw 19%,filling the second position.It is noticeable that the proportion of people from (改a) household which is(改was) made up of (改a) couple with children(12%) was 2 times as many as family(改families) with (改a) single aged person(6%).Aged people were generally less likely to be poor,due to the fact that aged couple family(改families) living in poverty account(改accounted) for only 4%.And the percentage of individuals from family(改families) with (改a) couple had(改having) no children occupy(改occupied) 7% in Australia in 1999.
Overall,it is obvious that people from family(改families) with children is(改are) more likely to living(改live) in poverty.