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NO.1 Can money buy happiness?
Although money can buy lots of things.But I think money can't buy,love and healthy.
People feel happy because they meet something interesting.If someone feel happy because of healthy,Can money buy it?
Lots of people say they are not happy.Why are they feel unhappy? They say making money make them tired. You see,Money can't buy happiness.
In a word, I don't think money can buy happiness.
NO.2 A letter
Dear Tom
This is LiangLiwei.How are you? we're friend in middle school.We haven't seen each other long time.
I don't know where are you go now.Must be a good high school.
Do you remember we always basketball together,and now I am more good that before.
well. If you have time, you can call me , we can play basketball.
write book soon and tell me all your news
All the best!
People feel happy because they meet something interesting..If someone feel happy because of healthy,Can money buy it?
不是很好可以改为： people feel happy because of the interesting things happened to them.if someone feel happy because the recover of a patient who is his best friend,can money buy it?
Why are they feel unhappy--why are they unhappy?
They say making money make them tired. You see,Money can't buy happiness.----they said think of ways to make money makes them tired.this just shows that money can't buy happiness.
In a word, I don't think money can buy happiness.
-----all in all, I believe money can't buy happiness
we're friend in middle school.We haven't seen each other long time.
----we haven't see each other after graduated from middle school.
I don't know where are you go now.Must be a good high school-------I don't which hight school you are now in, but must be a good o