UC知道我的英语作文大家给一个公平分
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题目：李华写信给外国朋友，关于日全食。
我的要点全都表达清楚了(和同学在云大碰面，天气合适，观察了两个小时，印象深刻，吸引了很多人，我对天文学产生了很大兴趣），大家主要看一下我的句型和结构，谢谢。
it`s really a wonderful sightseeing for us.i cannot emphasize the beautiful of this solar eclipse too much. i met my friends at 8:00 am. at yunnan university that morning. thanks to the god, the proper weather gave us a good chance to observe it. we last two hours and have got a deep impression of it. what amazing us is that so many people were attrcted by the solar eclipse, even though we can`t find a place to have a rest, you can see how fansinated the solar eclipse is.
last but not the least,i have learned a lot about the univese,and i did get a lot of interest of astronomy, maybe i will choose this subject in my univesity in the future.
25分是满分，老师只给了十六，大家看一下到底原因出在哪？我高三。
我的要点全都表达清楚了(和同学在云大碰面，天气合适，观察了两个小时，印象深刻，吸引了很多人，我对天文学产生了很大兴趣），大家主要看一下我的句型和结构，谢谢。
it`s really a wonderful sightseeing for us.i cannot emphasize the beautiful of this solar eclipse too much. i met my friends at 8:00 am. at yunnan university that morning. thanks to the god, the proper weather gave us a good chance to observe it. we last two hours and have got a deep impression of it. what amazing us is that so many people were attrcted by the solar eclipse, even though we can`t find a place to have a rest, you can see how fansinated the solar eclipse is.
last but not the least,i have learned a lot about the univese,and i did get a lot of interest of astronomy, maybe i will choose this subject in my univesity in the future.
25分是满分，老师只给了十六，大家看一下到底原因出在哪？我高三。
we last two hours and have got a deep impression of it.
典型的中国英语句式
what amazing us is that so many people were attrcted by the solar eclipse
删掉so
i cannot emphasize the beautiful of this solar eclipse too much. i met my friends at 8:00 am. at yunnan university that morning.
句式古板。
满分
用词和格式
写信的格式不对