UC知道我的英文求职信，麻烦帮我挑错并提修改意见
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1. I am experienced in financial investment. I have been working in a consulting firm providing investment advisory to financial institutions for more than 2 years. As a consultant, I have been actively involved in various consulting projects including market scan for investment opportunities, due diligence and study on listed companies.
2. I have strong education background which shows my outstanding learning ability. I holds a master's degree in Management Science & Engineering and a bachelor's degree in Management and Information Systems both from Tsinghua University in Beijing.
3. I have learned a lot of financial knowledge and passed CFA level 1 and level 2 exams in 2008 and 2009 respectively.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if
楼主很强势，有少数修改意见仅供参考，探讨而已，不足为凭。
1.I learned that your company is going to employ a financial analyst, so I am writing to you because I am very interested in the position and competent to your requirements.
1，want用于无人称主语不是很好，hire不如employ更常用，competent是胜任就无需meet了，意思重复。
2. I have experience in financial investment. I have worked in a consulting firm providing financial institutions with investment advice for more than 2 years. As a consultant, I have been actively involved in various consulting projects such as market scan for investment opportunities, due diligence investigation and study on listed companies.
2，I am experienced我经历了金融投资，比较别扭，不如改为我有……的经验，如想表达经历（不是一次），那可用复数。Provide……with……是典型的用法。用for more than 2 years就用现在完成时即可，同样表示现在还在这家咨询公司工作；如用完成进行时，那用since 200× 比较好。Due diligence加个investigation意思似乎更清楚一点。
3. I have a strong education background which shows my outstanding learning ability. I hold a master's degree in Management Science & Engineering and a bachelo