英语达人请进 作文问题

描述一个你人生当中的积极美好的改变（变化）

你应该写到：

它是怎麼发生的，

在哪发生的，

那个改变具体是什麼，

还要解释那个你从那个改变当中有什麼收获，（受到了什麼益处）

描述了生活中的积极变化
你应该说
当它发生
哪里发生
什么变化
并解释你有这种变化中受益

这是一篇关于如何建立自己的自信心的作文。这是我自己在参考各种资料的基础上完成的写作，不知道是否适合你的要求，或者太难或者太简单。顺便说一下，我是英语专业的。

I used to be unconfident while facing difficulties and coming acorss problems. Even standing in front of beautiful girls, I might be feel nervous and unconfident. That's really a big psychological challenge in my life. But I know we are all human and have flaws. Even if our physical appearance, unique personality, or social skills aren't what we wish we were, that doesn't have to stop us from being confident. We are beautiful inside and out so we should love ourself unconditionally. So I find some ways to help me overcome the unconfidence.
I first try to find my passion. Whether it's baton twirling, martial arts, musicianship, or basket weaving, I will f