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Denouncing people’s desire of pursuing money, fame, or power is unreasonable, and sometimes we regard these factors as parts of a success. Moreover, the success should build on conscience; otherwise, it will lose its value and be spurned by people. In fact, when we want to do something we should put conscience in priority rather than something else like wealth or honor.
Conscience can motivate people to breach their social restrictions and resistances. Nightingale, a famous nurse who used to be an up-class woman in England saw people suffering a great painful caused by lacking of good care. She disregard her family against discriminate and her up class life with fortitude to be a nurse taking good care to the patients. After her careful nursing, many people regained their health. It is obviously that her conscience gave her courage and motivation to do her loving nursing under the press of famil
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It may be hypocritical to denounce people’s worldly fervor for money, fame and power - the recognised symbols of success. However, achivements should be based on people's conscience, or else the significance of success suffers irreversible debilitation. In fact, conscience, rather than wealth or honor, should take the first priority.
Conscience can spur people to unshackle themsleves from social restrictions, and fight courageously against unjustified resistance. A once- upper-class English lady, Nightingale painstakingly witnessed people's immense sufferances in the absence of proper medical care. She adamantly disregarded her family and the prevalent societal discrimination, forgoing her affluent life to take up a nursing career. Thanks to her carefulness, many people regained health. Admittedly, her conscience has impelled her to fulfill her desired missions despite the stress of family and society.
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