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British Accent

Now many English learners are facing the trouble about how to practise a standard English accent.As we known,American accent and British accent are both popular in the world.American is easier to master than British,but British is more pleasant than American.Then what is the special about British accent?

I am not a specialist on this question,but I can give my own understandings on it.Firstly,British accent speak more quikly than American in my feelings,although it attempts to pronounce every word clearly,but every word just like a bean,once the Britishmen speak a bit quickly,it just like the beans pouring out together,so we can't hear it exactly when the Britishmen speak quickly.Secondly,it sounds more profunda,just like a British gentleman,I hear the words like that the American parents upbring their chidren to speak British accent in popular.Because it could highlight the parenting of the children.In a

As we known-->As we know
American is easier to master than British--->
American accent is easier to master than British one
pleasant--->pleased to hear (个人意见)
special -->feature
specialist--->expert
understandings-->opinions
speak、attempts 的主语应该是人:People speak British more quickly(原文拼错)than American English,though they try to pronounce...
but 后面的比喻另起一句。
it just like-->it's just like
exactly-->clearly
Secondly,it -->(这一点更多指的是内容,不是口音,it应具体化)
profunda-->profound
upbring (这不是个词吧,你太不认真了,这也太中国化了)
expressions of emotion --》(这是观点不是情绪的表达)

你文章的问题太多了。太难说!!!!!!!!!

亲……10分太少了,你文章的问题太多了。