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Some parents want to buy too expensive to toys so that children can occupied. Children need fewer toys but more time to stay with their parents.

Parents should not have the mind that children can by occupied by very expensive toys without affection. It is hard to assess how important family love is for a person when he is a child. However, many parents are lack of time to stay with their children because of many reasons such as busy working, irresponsibility or even dislike children. But they are not enough good reason that they can give less time to stay with their children. As parents, you give a life for your child, and then you had to educate them rather than just give them too expensive toys. Although someone might say that the toys also have the function which can educate children, that is far from the standard what a child should be educated.

Toys may have sort of functions of enhance children’s intelligent but the toys cannot substitute from their parents

Some parents want to buy some expensive toys to satisfy their children,and to fill their lives . what they ignored is that Children need fewer toys but more time to stay with their parents.

Parents should not have the mind that children can be occupied by the expensive toys which they consider no effection to them no matter have or not. It is hard to say how important the family love is to a child. However, many parents are lack of time to stay with their children because of many reasons such as busy working,busy houseworking ,and playing outside . (irresponsibility or even dislike children.这点应该不能成为没时间的原因吧) But these can' be the excuses that they can spare less time to stay with their children. As parents, you should dovote all your life to your child's grow , you have the responsibility to educate them rather than just give them very expensive toys. Although someone may say that toys can also educate children, that is far from the standard that a child