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today we will introduce a new energy drink.
You will be interested to hear that we have just maketed our new product which are no suger, add vitamin C&B,health and nature. Also,we have got four different taste,which are berry,lemon,orange and original.the package include carton and glass bottles, different colour for different taste.
If you had a party last night and you still working today, that's no problem, you can just drink one and get fresh and power all day.
today we will introduce a new energy drink.
You will be interested to hear that we have just maketed(marketed) our new product （which are no suger）(改为in which there is no suger), (add vitamin C&B)(改为adding vitamin C&B),health and nature. Also,we have got four different taste,(这里把逗号去掉）which are berry,lemon,orange and original.the package include carton and glass bottles, （加上having) different colour(colours) for different taste(tastes).
If you had a party last night and you(you去掉） still working today, that's（that's改为there is) no problem, you can( you can去掉，后面的改成一个独立的句子）just drink one and （加上you will) get fresh(refreshed) and power all day.
today we will introduce a new energy drink.
You will be interested to hear that we have just maketed (marketed)our new product which are(contain) no suger(sugar), add vitamin C&B,(with)health and nature. Also,we have got four different (four kind of )taste,which are(they are) berry,lemon,orange and original.the package