求一篇英语文章,请各位高手帮忙!英语爱好者请进!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/23 12:14:03
如题,求一篇英语作文。

请大家看看题目:
近年来,一些学生在过生日的时候,举办大型的生日聚会,这可能带来一些问题。请你根据提示内容,用英语写一篇短文。

提示: 可能存在的问题
1.花费很多钱,家庭不算富裕的学生感到烦恼
2.浪费时间,不利用于学习
3.容易染上抽烟、喝酒的恶习

你将提出的建议…

提示词汇:染上恶习 get into bad habits
庆祝生日 celebrate birthdays
注意:1.所给提示内容必须全部用上,并适当发挥,词数80~100。
2.短文开头部分已经给出,不计入总词数。

In recent years, some students hold big birthday parties to celebrate their birthdays.
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写的好的,被采纳后会追加分,谢谢!
关于这个问题,我希望英语爱好者可以写一篇。
我也不会全部照抄,我只是要来参考,有个提纲也是可以的。 但最好要一篇范文。谢谢!
请各位不要用电脑的翻译机来翻译,这样没有什么用那,会出现很多语法错误!谢谢!

In recent years, some students hold big birthday parties to celebrate their birthdays.
but they always chose a bad way to celebrate it .maybe there some problems .like :
1.the big party need a lt of money.some families don't have too much money and can't pay the bill for children,and childen will not happy.
2.It's a waste of time,it's not good for our study.
3.It's easy get into bad habits like drink and smoke.
In my opinion,It's a not good thing .It's a waste of money and time .but some rich families can give their children a big party .It's also a not bad thing .they can make there child happy and outging.So I can't say that which is the best.but i want to tell you don't get into bad habits,it's dangerous!

In recent years, some students hold big birthday parties to celebrate their birthdays. however this is not a good practice to be promoted. Organizing such party is costly. students from medium and