写完的英语作文,老师们帮看一下,谢谢!(积分就这么多了,请见谅!)

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写完的英语作文,老师们帮看一下,谢谢!
老师布置的作业为:Some university students want to live in a room alone. Others prefer having roommates. Which do you like better, living alone or living with roommates? Give specific examples to support your answer. 200words

我写的作文如下:living with roommates is best
Some university students want to live in a room alone. Others prefer having roommates. In my opinion that living with roommates is best.
On the one hand,living with roommates can improving ability about intercommunicate and it is favorable base for society.As the saying goes that the fittest will survive and experience is the best teacher,intercomunicate can getting students the edge and will climbing the career ladder after.
On the other hand,living with roommates can acquiring helpness.As the saying goes that many hesds are better than one and there is kindness to be found everywhere,roommate protrude assistance hands when students barge up against trouble,students are cutting energy

不怎么好,全是优点,世上没有十全十美的人。。。。

不错,可以。学习很好嘛

写的很好,跟室友一起住很好,不过应该写一点跟室友住的缺点,全是优点也不好

不错,可以.跟室友一起住很好,不过应该写一点跟室友住的缺点

不错

哇!我还没有见过怎么好的作业。你的学习可真好啊!!!!!!!!!!简直十全十美