UC知道~~英语短文改错（一共6个错误）~~谢谢各位了
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Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our village.This is my first time to be a guide,so it’s really thrilled to me.With its beauty of the nature,our village attracts tens of thousands of visitors from home and abroad.Besides,you’ll also be interested in the rich culture of our village.Now,I’d like to tell you something about our tour.
At 7,in the morning of October 1st,we’ll meet at the gate of the hotel and then walk to an orchard where you can pick fresh oranges and tastes it yourselves.Then ,at 9,we’ll walk to the Boating Paradise,sailing on the water.Next,at 11,we’ll go to the Fishing Garden,you can get lots of fun out of fishing,Finally,at 12,we’ll return back to the hotel and have lunch together.
I do hope we together will make the trip worthwhile and unforgettable.
Welcome to our village.This is my first time to be a guide,so it’s really thrilled to me.With its beauty of the nature,our village attracts tens of thousands of visitors from home and abroad.Besides,you’ll also be interested in the rich culture of our village.Now,I’d like to tell you something about our tour.
At 7,in the morning of October 1st,we’ll meet at the gate of the hotel and then walk to an orchard where you can pick fresh oranges and tastes it yourselves.Then ,at 9,we’ll walk to the Boating Paradise,sailing on the water.Next,at 11,we’ll go to the Fishing Garden,you can get lots of fun out of fishing,Finally,at 12,we’ll return back to the hotel and have lunch together.
I do hope we together will make the trip worthwhile and unforgettable.
1."it’s really thrilled to me"
to→of还是thrilled → thrilling？这句绝对有错！但是不确定怎么改。。
2.“With its beauty of the nature”
去the,nature是特指，不加定冠的说～
3."in the morning of October"有OF用ON
in →on
4."tastes it yourselves"前后一致（前面有CAN）
tastes→taste
5."return back to "固定搭配
去back
6.最后一个同意LS的加where
where you can get lots of fun out of fishing
因为中间是逗号，后面必须用从句勒