帮忙看下语法有没有问题~

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/21 11:54:19
1)She sang so well that I fell in love with her at the first sight.
她唱的非常好以至于我第一眼就喜欢上她.
2)She is not only good at singing but also has a good quality that I should learn from.
她不仅唱歌好,还具有我应该向她学习的好的品质.
3)Many people praise her modesty too.
许多人赞美她的谦虚的品质.
4)在内地应该是in mainland还是at mainland.
5)As soon as I'm sad,her songs make me feel very comfortable.
每当我伤心时,她的歌能让我舒心.
6)XXX is a prefect girl in my mind.
在我心里XXX是个完美的女孩.
7)她的梦想是成为一个大家都喜欢的最好的歌手.这句话怎么翻译.
8)I wish her dream can really do come ture in the future.
我希望在未来的某一天她的梦想可以真正实现.

这些句子有没有语法错误!!!!大家帮忙看下!!!!万分感谢~~~!!!!

第2句， quality改成 character, quality一般指物，不用于人

第3句，Many people praise her for modesty

in mainland

5、As soon as 建议改成when,语气更柔和
6、OK
7、她的梦想是成为一个大家都喜欢的最好的歌手
To be the most popular singer is her dream
成为大家最受欢迎的歌手，是她一直以来的梦想
8、OK

1)She sang so well that I fell in love with her at first sight.
她唱的非常好以至于我第一眼就喜欢上她.
2)She is not only good at singing but also has good qualities that I should learn from her.
她不仅唱歌好,还具有我应该向她学习的好的品质.
3)Many people praise of her modesty too.
许多人赞美她的谦虚的品质.
4)在内地应该是in mainland.
5)Every time I feel sad,her songs will make me very comfortable.
每当我伤心时,她的歌能让我舒心.
6)XXX is a prefect girl in my mind.
在我心里XXX是个完美的女孩.
7)她的梦想是成为一个大家都喜欢的最好的歌手.这句话怎么翻译.
Her dream is to become the best singer that everyone loves.
8)I hope her dream can come ture in the future.
我希望在未来的某一天她的梦想可以真正实现.