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My classmate introduced this university to me, as he applied for this school. He said this school is very good, so I checked information about this school on the Internet and found that this university is really very good.
上面的checked换成search会好些吗？请高手给我修改下这个句子

感觉把introduce改为recommend更好，是同学“推荐”给你的；

恩，换了更好，在网上搜寻资料 ，注意时态，应该是searched
把this university 换成it吧，前面提到了，用代词就更简练
其他就没大问题了

checked 换不换成SEARCH我觉得问题不大。都OK
不过感觉这句子挺多重复的。
my classmate introduced this university to me,as he applied for.he said that the school is very good.so i checked the imformation about that on the internet and found that its really good.

As my classmate had applied for the university, he recommended it to me. Because he spoke high of the college, I then surfed the internet for some information about it and found what he said was true. 嘻嘻，我帮忙润色了一下，感觉原句的语言稍单调了些，而且词语重复使用了蛮多次哦～希望对你有用吧:-)