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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/22 07:43:19
As can be seen from the cartoon, nowadays students have endless homework to do(删除to do 更简洁) every day, and teachers the same have endless homework to mark(重新开始一个新句子:As a result, teachers have the same huge amount of homework to mark). The ( this)situation is obvious(quite common) in the stage from primary school to senior high school(This situation is quite common in primary school, middle school and high school). In the stage, most of sudents are minors and too much homework makes them burden heavily(Students from primary school to high school are only minors. This overwhelming amount of work impacts their life heavily.). Students’interest is (Their interests are)ignored by teachers and their parents(their teachers and parents). The current education system is not aimd at students’ quality(bringing up higher quality education to students), but only at developing their ability to perform well on the tests. A student could enter a good unversity or not accoding to his scores entirely