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As we all known, many Museum are free to the people now.they do not sell tickets.,and guides are free too.The museum”s purpose may be want to let more more people come in. The modern people is so busy that they hardly go to the museum to know the history and science.,even the students.The museum is open to the people without tickets. It can be attracted to people who go to the musemu, and learn some knowledge.
As for the musemu is free, more and more people go to the museum in holiday. The parents take their children to go to the museum let them have acess in science and history in the childhood.Every coin has two sides. There are some problems because the museum is free, for example: many people come to the museum in holiday ,so that the museum becomes so crowded, and people throw garbages and destroy the Exhibits. This is harm to protect the museum.
In my opinion, the museum is still free to people ,but they should limit the numble of people who come to the museum everyda

As we all know. many museums aere free to the people from now on. people do not have to buy tickets to enter musuem. Maby the museum's purpose is want to let more and more people to come into the museum and have a look on it. The modern people are so busy that they don't even have a single time to go to museum and study about history and science. As the museum is starting to open to public without any tickets, this will attract alot of people to go to the museum and learn some knowledge.
As the museum is free, more and more peole will go to the museum in holiday. Parents will olso take their children to the museum and explain about the history and science for them. however, there were some problems due to the free tickets servies. For example: many people come to the museum in holiday, so the museum become very crowded, and people throw rubbish and destroy the status.
In my opinion, the museum can be still free to people, but they should limited the number of peop