请大家帮我改一英语作文 很简单的~~

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If one day,we moved to anther plant.If it real happend I would change my life.First I would like to live in a place where didn't have to study.So we could have much time to play with our friends.Second,it must be clean ,quiet ang beautiful place.I think it's good for our health, As jobs ,I wish I were a scientist.And during the weekends I would fly to the earth by UFO and travel in the space by rocket.That's sounds cool.I think the life in space must be interesting.

If one day,we moved to anther plant.If it real happend , I would change my life.First, I would like to live in a place that there is no need to study,so we could have much time to play with our friends.Second,it must be a clean ,quiet and beautiful place.I think it's good for our health. And work ,I wish I were a scientist.And during the weekends I would fly to the earth by UFO and travel in the space by rocket.That sounds cool.I think the life in the space must be interesting.

改好的：If one day we moved to anther plant.If it real happend I would change my life.First， I would like to live in a place where need not to study，so we could have much time to play with our friends.Second,it must be a clean ,quiet ang beautiful place.I think it's good for our health, As for jobs I wish I were a scientist.And during the weekends I would fly to the earth by UFO and travel in the space by rocket.That sounds cool.I think the life in space must be interesting.