UC知道求达人改cet6作文
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我写了2篇6级作文 求高手帮帮改改 评评分
1阅读经典对人的成长至关重要2现在愿意读经典的人越来越少，原因是。。。3我们大学生应该怎么做？
the importance of reading classics
As is known to all,reading classics plays a vital role in one's growing process.Not only could it enrich our experiences,but also classics may inspire us with lots of positive stories.
However,less and less people prefer to reading classics.The reasons vary widely.First ,the time that stories in classics is far from us now. The blackground is unfamiliar to us.Second,compared with previous generation,we become more unpeaceful.It is hard for us to finish so long a story.Third, popular modern books make a heavy toll to classics,which should cause public concern.
As far as I am concerned,we college students should read books varing different fields.Apart from popular books, classics is a good choice fo us. We are supposed to spend more time on reading rather than watching tv or surfing online. I am sure if reading classics becomes a part in our
第一篇~~1.less不能形容people。应该是few and few people
2.prefer to do sth./prefer doing sth.你写的是prefer to doing
3.the reasons 那句如果是副词修饰形容词，（very widely）就缺少系动词啊。或者是这句你的意思是主谓宾，widely是副词啊，应该用wide
4.so long a story语法不对吧，可以是such a long story
5.part of life 就可以
6.还有最后那个largely，我知道你是不想和之前那个widely重复，但是large 不太适用于这种抽象意义上的广泛，extensive或者comprehensive比较好，或者直接benifit a lot
第二篇~~
1.首先plus 用的太生硬，用add，或者句首用In addtion~~
2.continue用的不太好，有点纯粹汉译英，后面的by，应该换为through，
3.form意思是形式。但不能用在这里，侧重是表格形式啊，排列形式啊，这里可以简单用the way of……，
4.建议go out（of home），ofhome可以省略
5.recieve表示被动的接受，用在这里也不合适，to gain ingormation,to learn knowledge,to improve ourselves等等简简单单都可以
6.learn again and again??这个。。
from 改成accroding to吧，thekeyto success is……
其实我也不是学的怎么太好的，只是感觉你写的比较生硬。。之间还有一些句与句衔接的问题。
个人意见啊，别介意，总体感觉很好，运用了很多句型，句型也很少重复，很好啊。
第一篇~~1.less不能形容people。应该是few and few people
2.prefer to do sth./prefer doing sth.你写的是prefer to doing
3.the reasons 那句如果是副词修饰