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I once work in a factory. On 1
a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2
out all at once. I rushed out but could see 3
nothing. Fortunately the warned system was 4
direct connected with the police station, and 5
for three or four minutes four police cars 6
arrived at the front gate. The police looked at 7
all round the factory, but were found nothing 8
unusual. A police told me that the rain must 9
have affected the electricity system and cause 10
a short circuit.
Aeroplanes are slow driving me mad. I live near an 11
airport and passing planes can be heard at night and day. 12
The airport was built during the war, but for some reasons 13
it could not be used then. Last year, therefore, it came 14
to u
once work in a factory. On 1
once这里是曾经,,所以work应该用过去式worked
a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2
rain---->rainy,这个很明显
out all at once. I rushed out but could see 3
but连接的是两个句子,所以后面could前的I不能省
nothing. Fortunately the warned system was 4
warned改为warning,报警系统warning system
direct connected with the police station, and 5
direct改为directly,应该用副词
for three or four minutes four police cars 6
没发现错
arrived at the front gate. The police looked at 7
looked 后的at去掉,用做look的不及物用法
all round the factory, but were found nothing 8
were去掉
unusual. A police told me that the rain must 9
police改为policeman
have affected the electricity system and cause 10
a short circuit.
cause改为caused,完成时态
once work in a factory. On 1 worked
a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2 rainy
out all at once. I rushed out