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At present, high-school education in China usually have two focuses that are humanity focus and science focus.When we become senior school students,we have to face with a choice.We will enter different subject fields attribute to the decision of which focus we are going to choose.To me it is difficult to make a wisdom decision,I always argue that high-school education in China should not devide into two focuses.
First of all, the age of senior school students is probleby seventeen or eighteen years old. It is too young for them to make a right choice. They even don`t know what differences between humanity and scienc. Usually, the choice the young students make reflects the aspiration of their parents, not theirs. But the long road towards the fields they choose must be completed step by step by young students not their pairents.Hence, it is not wisdom to have two focuses in Chinese high-school education. In addition, interdiscipline is complementary. The senior school students nee

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