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People used to say” Behind every successful man there‘s a woman.” It means that women often sacrifice their own career to help their husbands or sons. In China, the position of women in the society has been changing since the founding of the People’s Republic of China in 1949. Today, instead of being housewives, more and more women are going to find their own professions. Now, women are playing important roles in various fields. But do we satisfy only because we have a job? No! We also need respect, need social recognition!
From my point of view, the most important thing we need to do is to be independent--- both physically and mentally. I have read a book named< Jane Eyre >. This is a story about a special woman who has been struggled for her ideal life fearlessly. The story can be looked as a symbol of the independent spirit. In the story, Jane Eyre was economic independence---- she got her job to be a tutor after long years
People used to say” Behind every successful man there‘s a woman.” It means that women often sacrifice their own career to help their husbands or sons. In China, the position of women in the society has been changing since the founding of the People’s Republic of China in 1949. Today, instead of being housewives, more and more women are going to find their own professions. Now, women are playing important roles in various fields. But do we satisfy only because we have a job? No! We also need respect, need social recognition!（need respect and social recognition，要气势的话，可以用排比句，^_^）
From my point of view, the most important thing we need to do is to be independent--- both physically and mentally. I have read a book named< Jane Eyre >. This is a story about a special woman who has been struggled（been struggling） for her ideal life fearlessly. The story can be looked（可以用，view，see，或是consider这类要深度考虑的词） as a symbol of the independent spirit. In the story, Jane Eyre was economic ind