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Grape

There are a lot of fruits we can find on the market, including banana, pear, grape, water melon, etc. I like to eat every kind of fruits. However, among all of them, grape is a special choice for me.

In the past summer, I visited my college classmate Tsing. She is a kind girl two years younger than me. It was the hottest time in the beginning of August. When I entered her big house in the afternoon, I drank a bottle of iced cola, and then felt cool and pleasant. We have not seen each other almost four years. Tsing looked more beautiful and mature than ever. She let me sit down and showed me all kinds of delicious fruits on the table. Tsing was so warm-hearted and hospitable to me that I felt very excited to visit her.

“I imagine you are tired from the journey,” Tsing asked politely,” do you want to have a rest now?”
“It doesn’t matter. When I come here, my first thing is to talk with you, and the last thing is to go to sleep.”I answered.