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you are going to london to take a training course for a month. pls write a letter to the local accomodation agency to prepare a flat for u. u should tell him 1 ur information,2 ur requirement, 3when u would arrive.

Dear sir
I would be greatgul if you would me with the following informations,I will go to london to join my training class,thus,I write to you to ask same informations because I am not famalay with there.
The training course will costs me about a month,so I will live there at least one month.I am a boy who is 20 years old,and I study in an university now.In first place,I want live by myself for a good condition,just a house is suitable for me.In the second place,I will arrive london at the begining of next month.
However,I am not good at English,this is why I want live by meself,it far better to living in a quite area.Also,some facilities is neccary to me,because I am a foreigner here ,I may fell alone.At the same time, a good air-condition is use

Dear Sir.
I would be grateful if you would supply me with the following information. I will go to London to join my training class, thus, I write to you to ask for same information because I am not familiar with there.

The training course will cost me about a month，so I will live there at least one month. I am a boy who is 20 years old, and I study in a university now. In first place, I want to live by myself for a good condition, and just a single house is suitable for me. In the second place, I will arrive at London at the beginning of next month.

However, I am not good at English, that is why I want to live by myself, it is far better to living in a quite area. Also, some facilities are necessary to me, because I am a foreigner here, I may fell alone. At the same time, a good air-condition is useful for me, the weather is a little dry but warm in china, while in this season it must be wet in England, this mean I will fell cold when I am here.