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感觉不快乐吗?英国的莱斯特大学的研究院估计是因为你住在不对的国家。莱斯特大学社会心理学分析师Adrian White发明了第一个“世界快乐地图”。他认为丹麦是世界上最快乐的国家。
White的研究通过一系列统计数据与来自各个国家的八万人的主观反馈分析了178个国家的康乐现状。丹麦与五个欧洲国家,包括瑞士、奥地利、冰岛在内排了前十名,而津巴布韦与布隆迪落到最后。
不令人惊讶的是,最快乐的国家是世界上最有钱的,最健康的,最有学问的国家。“最主要的因素是健康、贫穷水平、教育的使用权,”White说。人口大小也扮一个很重要的角色。社会凝聚力最大的,民族身份最强的小国成绩比较高,而人最多的大国成绩比较低。中国排第82、印度拍第125、俄罗斯排第167。美国排第23。
Feeling sad? Researchers at Britain's University of Leicester reckon you might just be in the wrong country. According to Adrian White, an analytic social psychologist at Leicester who developed the first "World Map of Happiness," Denmark is the happiest nation in the world.
White's research used a battery of statistical data, plus the subjective responses of 80,000 people worldwide, to map out well-being across 178 countries. Denmark and five other European countries, including Switzerland, Austria, and Iceland, came out in the top 10, while Zimbabwe and Burundi pulled up the bottom.

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They do not feel happy? Research Institute of the University of Leicester UK estimates because you live in the wrong country. University of Leicester social psychology analyst Adrian White invented the first "world map of happiness." He believes that Denmark is the world's happiest country.
White's research through a series of statistical data and 80000 people from various countries, the subjective feedback analysis of the 178 countries of recreational status. Denmark and five European countries, including Switzerland, Austria, Iceland, including the top 10 ranked, while Zimbabwe and Burundi last fall.
Not surprisingly, the most happy country is the world's richest and most healthy, the most learned country. "The main factor is the health, poverty levels, education, the right to use," White said. Population size also play a very important role. The greatest social cohesion, national identity, a small country wit