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We received our request on December 4. You might make some mistake, so we didn’t get exactly what we request. We return the extra posters and request 73 more pens and 10 free movie passes of An Inconvenient Truth.

Thank for giving us the items for starting the offsetting, but there is some mistake. We return the extra poster and need 73 more pens. We still need 10 movie passes, there are very good motivation for employees to donate. Please gave our request before December 20; we are worried after December 20 our employees are already going on holidays.

We are very glad to cooperate with you; I hope we have more chance to corporate after you finish our request. If you have some question, please all (929) 987-8712 to me.

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We received our request on December 4. You might have maken(might+完成时表示对过去事情的推测) some mistakes(mistake要加s), so we didn’t get exactly what we need（request改need）. We return the extra posters and asking for(request改为asking for)73 more pens and 10 free movie passes of An Inconvenient Truth.

Thank for giving us the items for starting the offsetting, but there are some problems（改为此句）. （We return the extra poster and need 73 more pens. We still need 10 movie passes,此处与上面重复，删除） there are very good motivation for employees to donate. Please gave our request before December 20，for，after December 20 our employees are going on holiday（此处的s要删除）.（改为此句）

We are very glad to cooperate with you; I hope we have more chance for business(to corporate改为for business) in the future(after you finish our request改为in the future). If you have any question(some改为any), please call me at (929) 987-8712(改为call me at)。

request是什么具体的东西,要在第一次说明

we will give back the extra post