求翻译一个句子 汉译英 在线等！！！！！

He advocates a college culture of freedom and democracy, and takes initiative to incorporate a package of reform into both teaching materials and management system.

本人自己翻译的，五年专职英汉/汉英翻译经验。
没有逐词对照去译，而是把句子的意思翻译出来了。

供参考，如下：

他倡导自由民主的校园文化，从教学内容到管理体制率先推行了一系列改革措施。

He advocated a free and democratic school culture and took the initiative to put forward a series of reforms ranging from the teaching content to the management system.

He advocates of freedom and democracy, campus culture from the teaching content management system implementation to lead a series of reform measures

he advocated free and democratic campus culture and initiated a series of reforms which varied from teaching content to administrative system

he advocates democracy in school culture, and he first has a series of reform ranging from school's teaching content to the system of running the school

He advocated a free and democratic school culture, from