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In the past ten years,great changes have taken place in my hometown.In the past, my hometown have no big and tall buildings,the house is small and dark.We lived in it was crowed.The road was narrow.And a few children can go to school,they go to school on foot or by bike.But now,my hometown build many tall buildings.People’s house is bigger and brighter than before.The road become wide.And a lot of children can go to school,they go to school by car or by bus.How great changes have taken place in my hometown!
老师帮我圈出来的有：have no,house is small ,in it was crowed,hometown build many tall buildings,road become wide,How great changes have

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