UC知道在线等，急急急！英语高手进。自己已写好的英语短文，看看有没有错！
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/25 09:34:02
Happy birthday to China!
Every October first it’s our motherland birthday.This National Day she has been the 60-year-old birthday.
On this October first, the whole nation in celebrating this holiday to celebrate. Everywhere on the streets flew the flags,the television also on the of the motherland 60 years of change, each place feel to the festival atmosphere. The people watched the National Parade in the morning and watched the evening party in the evening .
Our motherland is 60 years old this year. Congratulations on the 60th Anniversay of the Founding of Our Motherland.
Happy birthday to her!Happy birthday to China!
在线等，急需！！！！！！跪求了！！
额 television also on the of the motherland 60 years of change是什么意思？？？
本人能力有限 只能如是了——
Happy Birthday To China!
Every October first is our motherland's birthday.This National Day is her 60-year-old birthday.
On this year's National Day, the whole nation was celebrating this holiday. Everywhere on the streets flew the flags,the television also on the of the motherland 60 years of change, each place feels to the festival atmosphere. People watched the National Parade in the morning and watched the evening party in the evening .
Our motherland is 60 years old this year. Congratulations to the 60th Anniversay of the Founding of Our Motherland.
Happy birthday to her!Happy birthday to China!
生日快乐中国！
每年10月第一个是我们的祖国birthday.This国庆她已经60岁的生日。
在今年10月第一，庆祝这一节日，庆祝全国。街道上到处飞的标志，也代表祖国60年的变化，感觉每个地方的节日气氛电视。观看的人在上午的全国巡游，并在晚上观看了晚会。
我们的祖国是60岁这一年。祝贺60周年发表的创始我们的祖国。
她生日快乐！生日快乐中国！
简直就是Chingl