这英文句子有没有错？

不可以。名词后面要么是从句要么是名词性短语。

可以说 confirms the receipt of the remittance.

不可以。你要不用从句，confirms that he has received ....
要不 用receiving

不能，把后面的句子变成从句：I will arrange the production immediately after colleague confirms that we have received the remittance