帮我找一下下文的语病。或者说有什么添加或删减的地方请帮忙一下。谢谢！

来源：百度知道编辑：UC知道时间：2024/05/24 17:03:47

I want to introduce a shine star to you,his name is Jay Zhou.He is born in the January 18th 1979 in Taiwan,China.His type is “O”,he is one point seventy three meter.He is a much identity’s man.He is singer,boss, palyactor,and……He likes music,but his hobby is very extensive.For example,seeing movies,playing basketball,playing games and writing songs.He speak Taiwanese and Chinese,and he can speak a little English.I like his music,I like him,too.

1.shining star 明亮之星，简称明星
2.He was born 出生都是用过去式的，所以是was
3.18th January 顺序调转日期顺序：日、月、年
4.and he is one。。。加个and衔接
5.meters，需要加个s，表复数
6.He has many identities 他有许多身份或者说he has many different kinds of identity,他有许多不同的身份
7.He is a singer，a boss，。。。要加个a，他是一个歌手，一个老板。。。
8.He speaks
9.and I like him，too

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