UC知道帮我看看有没有语病(英文)
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帮忙看看,有语病帮我修改,这是我明天比赛的开场白
正文:Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone(dear teachers), I'm from class eleven, Grade seven,Jin niu experimental middle school. I am a lively and happy girl.I like english and music quite a lot, Today, I am going to take us a very happy song called JAMABALAYA, I wish that you could like it.
正文:Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone(dear teachers), I'm from class eleven, Grade seven,Jin niu experimental middle school. I am a lively and happy girl.I like english and music quite a lot, Today, I am going to take us a very happy song called JAMABALAYA, I wish that you could like it.
Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone(dear teachers), I'm from class eleven, Grade seven, in Jin niu experimental middle school. I am a lively and happy girl.I like English and music quite a lot, Today, I am going to take us a very happy song called JAMABALAYA, and I wish that you could like it.
写得不错 就只有 Grade seven, in Jin niu 和English
两处小毛病
Today, I am going to play you a very happy song called JAMABALAYA, I hope that you will like it.
english E
i am a lovely and happy girl
lively 一般指鲜活的
写的还行
路过...提醒一下 那个歌叫jambala 不是jamabala