UC知道英语高手帮我改下这篇自己写的英语作文,有很多问题呢~
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Dream is sun.Dream is light.Dream is_______(写一个和前者适合的单词).
When I was a little a girl.I had a dream.I think the dream is very wonderful.Can you guess it? Yes,I want to be singer.
When I was nine years old.I listened one of Rong zu'er's songs.Its name is "Hui Zhe Chi Bang De Nv Hai(请用英文翻译一下歌名，是挥着翅膀的女孩）"Since then,I started learning to sing songs.
Learning to sing songs is very different.I spent a lot of time on it.I had a sorethroat soon.I had to eat so much medicine.But I'm not afriad(害怕，貌似写错了）of it.I still practied it hard.Because I belived if I practice hard,my dream will be ture(这里要用到“主将从先”这个语法，但我不会。）.I always say"Come On" to myself.I also learned to how to play the drums.It helps me a lot in music.
After two years,I did well in singing ongs.I began to take part in the singsing games.I did my best and won second places.I felt very exciting to cry.I thing my efforts were not in vain.Now, I want tn sing a so
Dream is sun.Dream is light.Dream is_______(写一个和前者适合的单词).
(Dream is the light and is the sun as well.如果你非得要排比句的话，那就：Dream is the candle;Dream is the lamp; Dream is the sun as well; because the lamp is brighter than the candle,and the sun is the brightest.)
When I was a little a girl.I had a dream.I think the dream is very wonderful.Can you guess it? Yes,I want to be a singer.
(i have had a wonderful dream that i will become a super singer one day since my childhood.Do you think so?)
When I was nine years old.I listened one of Rong zu'er's songs.Its name is "Hui Zhe Chi Bang De Nv Hai(请用英文翻译一下歌名，是挥着翅膀的女孩）"Since then,I have started learning to sing songs.
(A girl flies with her wing)
To learn to sing is very difficult.I spent a lot of time on it.I had a sorethroat soon.I had to eat so many medicine.But I'm not afraid(害怕，貌似写错了）of it.I still practied it hard.Because I belived if I practice hard,my dream will come ture(这里要用到“主将从先”