谁帮我用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。A Day to Remember（难忘的一天）

A Day to Remember
I still remember that day about which I will never forget.It was the first time I dated with my girlfriend.It was a sunny day and so was my mood.In the morning,we went to the park where a flower show was on.We were delighted to see and enjoy these flowers like roses and chrysanthemums.After that,we went to the KFC to have our lunch.We both enjoyed eating such delicious hambergars and potato chips.Then,we went to the cinema to wath a film named"Pirates of the Caribbean"which we enjoyed much.After that,we went to the Starbucks to have a cup of coffee and we talked about many things untill too late.This is the day I will never forget about.

我写的是我和我女朋友第一次约会 不知道行不行
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It was Sunday. Our teacher Mr Zhu led us to a park nearby.Usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. But today we went there to take part in voluntary labour. We got there at nine o’clock. Mr Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working. Th