英语考级 1级 重赏！

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我要考级 但是文章的字数不够 谁可以帮我加一加啊？ 重赏！
有可能会有一些词打错 在这里先道歉

HELLOW TEACHERS MY NAME IS YANG FAN,I`M 14YEARS OLD BUT I`M TALL THAN OTHER GIRLS IN MY CLASS.TODAY I`M VERY GLAD TO SEE YOU HERE AND STAND HERE.I`M A HUMOR MIDDLE SCHOOL STUDENT .I LIKE MANY THINGS,SUCH AS LEARN ENGLISH,TALK TO OTHERS IN ENGLISH,AND INTRUDUCE MYSELF IN ENGLISH AND SO ON.BECAUSE ENGLISH IS AN INTERENATIONAL LANGUAGE .AT PRESENT,THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE CAN SPEAK ENGLISH WELL,IN A WORD ,ENGLISH IS VERY IMPORTANT.I LIKE TO EAT CANDY BECAUSE IT CAN MAKE YOU DOWN INTO ITS SWEETNESS.MY FAVORITE COLOR IS BLUE,BECAUSE IT CAN GIVE YOU A FEELING OF FRESHMENT. I`M A COMMONPLACE(平凡的) STUDENT,LIKE OTHER GIRS AND BOYS.IF YOU WANT TO HELP ,I WILL DO MY BEST GIVE HELP TO YOU. NOW I CAN STAND HERE I THINK I`M MORE CONFIDENCE (自信)THAN OTHERS.O.K AT LAST THANKS FOR LISTENING TO ME CAREFULLY.THAT`S ALL.THANK YOU.
300以上 但是不要太多 要求是3分钟
如果100 不够 再追也可以考虑 但是要先见稿
QQ 420078647
不是我 是我同学 拜托了 跪求

HELLOW TEACHERS MY NAME IS YANG FAN,A 14YEARS OLD Schoolgirl who id the tallest IN MY CLASS.TODAY I`M VERY GLAD TO SEE YOU HERE .I`M quite humorous ,and I LIKE MANY THINGS,SUCH AS LEARNing ENGLISH,reading english novels,and singing english songs,etc.(发音et cetra).AS ENGLISH IS AN INTERENATIONAL LANGUAGE ,THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE Speaking english very fluently(流利的),from whom i will learn more about english.
I LIKE TO EAT CANDY BECAUSE IT CAN MAKE YOU DOWN INTO ITS SWEETNESS.MY FAVORITE COLOR IS BLUE,BECAUSE IT CAN GIVE YOU A FEELING OF FRESHMENT. I`M A COMMONPLACE(平凡的) STUDENT,LIKE OTHER GIRS AND BOYS.IF YOU WANT TO HELP ,I WILL DO MY BEST GIVE HELP TO YOU. NOW I CAN STAND HERE I THINK I`M MORE CONFIDENCE (自信)THAN ever before.O.K AT LAST THANKS FOR LISTENING TO ME CAREFULLY.THAT`S ALL.THANK YOU.
我稍微该改动一下,保证OK

有些话罗嗦啦~~~像LEARN ENGLISH,TALK TO OTHERS IN ENGLISH,AND INTRUDUCE MYSELF IN ENGLISH就可以改成LEARNING, TALKING TO OTHERS AND INTRUDUCEING MYSELF IN ENGLISH.必须加ING,一个句子