帮我检查下语法错误~我只有30分了~TT~谢谢

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语法不好TT
The narrator named Dobie Gillis. He is a freshman in university of Minnesota. Dobie has a roommate named Petey Burch.Petey is a silly guy but has a beautiful girlfriend named Polly Espy.Ridiculously,Dobie is also an admirer of Polly and he plans himself to marry Polly after graduation. By a chance, Dobie owns a raccoon coat which is Petey desire to have. So Dobie gives the coat to Petey and gets the opportunity to date with Polly.However, Polly is a beautiful dumb girl. Dobie decides to change her into an intelligent girl so that she can meet the demand of being his wife. Through 5 nights, Dobie had taught the girl so many fallacies. He succeeds in making Polly an intelligent girl. Unfortunately, even the best players sometimes have an off day; Polly refuses Dobie to become his girlfriend. She finally chose Petey just because he had a raccoon coat.
The whole story is humorous and ironic. Dobie is the cleverest one in the story, but at the same time, he is also the most

The narrator is named Dobie Gillis. He is a freshman in the university of Minnesota. Dobie has a roommate named Petey Burch.Petey is a silly guy but has a beautiful girlfriend,Polly Espy.Ridiculously,Dobie is also an admirer of Polly and he planed for marrying Polly after graduation. By chance, Dobie owned a raccoon coat which Petey desired to have. So Dobie gave the coat to Petey and got the opportunity to date Polly. However, Polly is a beautiful dumb girl. Dobie decided to change her into an intelligent girl so that she can meet the demand to be his wife. Through 5 nights, Dobie had taught the girl so many fallacies. He succeeded in making Polly an intelligent girl. Unfortunately, even the best players have an off day; Polly refused to be his girlfriend. She finally chose Petey just because he had the raccoon coat.
The whole story is humorous and ironic. Dobie is the cleverest in the story, but at the same time, he is also the most stupid one. From my point of view, he is to