傍晚，天上飘着浮云。（改写成比喻句）

傍晚,天上飘着一条条红色的彩带.

At dusk, clouds are hovering in the sky.

At dusk, clouds are floating in the sky like the veil of a beautiful girl.

傍晚，天上的木棉花蘸了淡淡的葡萄酒，被夕阳烤熟了，给人沉甸甸的印象。