UC知道帮我修改这篇英语作文！谢谢…
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呃…写得不咋样，甚至很差…
希望只是修改原文…指出原文的错误，不要改动本文的意思！谢谢啦…
内容如下：
Animal are our friends , l love animal very much . above those so many animal , l love dog best !
There is a dog in my house sweety and honest . My family give she a name--si si . So when we call si si that she will appear in my eyes immediately , and wave her tail , looks like very happy . I like stroke her head it smoothy and makes me fell well . She also like jump to my body and lap my face ,she is so naughty .
Everytime when i come back home from school , she will run to me quickly when i stand in hundred meters from my house , like she is welcome me back .
That's my lovely dog , i love she very much ,she has become one of my family .
People in the city as well as those in other areas can enjoy a dog. Medium-size or small dogs are best suited for the confines of the city. Large dogs need considerable exercise over a large area.
son crocodile is so called the soil dragon, is only one crocodile in China to grow.BE produce in only once downstream in Yangtze River take, originally Chinese there is also moreover a kind of crocodile namely the gulf crocodile, but destroy completely already, so the 扬 son crocodile seem to be very precious, having already been list as one class protection animal.
The 扬 son crocodile body grows 2 meters or so, heavy 30-40 kilograms, the back takes the yellow spot and grain for the dark brown, the belly is a grey color, also yellow and small spot with horizontal.The coda has the ash black and alternate wreath 纹 , its arms and legs is thick short, the activity isn't very intelligent on the land, the swimming in water then is very nimble, its tail be the weapon of the attack