下午英语比赛 不知现在有人在么 帮帮忙啊~

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/29 04:01:01
这是我设计的流程

afternoon everyone~I'm one of class 116,its my honor to be here,and now,here is a poem for you——dear friends,and my favourite judges.

然后开始朗诵

Stray birds of summer come to my window to sing and fly away.
And yellow leaves of autumn, which have no songs, flutter and fall there with a sign.

O Troupe of little vagrants of the world, leave your footprints in my words.

It is the tears of the earth that keep here smiles in bloom.

The mighty desert is burning for the love of a bladeof grass who shakes her head and laughs and flies away.

If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you also miss the stars.

The sands in your way beg for your song and your movement, dancing water. Will you carry the burden of their lameness?

Her wishful face haunts my dreams like the rain at night.

Once we dreamt that we were strangers.
We wake up to find that we were dear to each other

one of class 116 one 改成a member 不好嘛。。。

dear friends,and my favourite judges 可以放最前面啊。

thanks all有点怪怪的。。。thank you,thank you all就好啦!

最后那个玩笑吧,可能人家一下明白不了啊
祝你下午顺利!!!

感觉第一句话不太妥当,改一下吧

还不错
不过你那个场合正式吗
适合开玩笑??

I'm one of class 116
改为
I'm from class 116
dear friends,and my favourite judges.
可删除

thanks all,thank you for attention.
改为that's all, thank you

笑话可省略

非常好!只要你注意自己的语速,并尽可能的朗读出感情就好了!相信自己你一定能成功!别急哈心态要放松,加油!