请问这几个英文句子有错误吗?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/14 21:14:32
这是小弟我背的作文范文里的一些句子,我朋友说这几个句子可能有错误,麻烦达人们帮我看一下有没有错, 如果错了,错在哪, 谢谢。
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For a period of time ,she was understandably ill-tempered.

With her love and patience,the teacher changed Helen intoa not
useful person,but also a productive writer.

The fouryear education I have received at university,coupled with my own experience,led me to conclude ..........

With her love and patience,the teacher changed Helen intoa not
useful person,but also a productive writer.
这一句中,用到的应该是not only...but also短语,表示不仅是...还是...改正后中间的一句应为
With her love and patience,the teacher changed Helen into not only a
useful person,but also a productive writer.