谁帮我翻译并修改下篇英语作文

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/29 23:41:30
An alien visited Shenzhen
In 2020 year , Shenzhen is best busier or beatifuls city on China. There are lots of people lives in Shenzhen . People harder working everyday ,and lifes are happy .
On a day , The sky become black .A big spaceship landing on Shenzhen. A ugly alien get out this spaceship.He very tall.He swimming at DaMeiSha .Then he run to
a ZOO .He eat lots of animal. After that he run down Empire State Building . There are frightening.The next day,he take her spaceship and go back to her planet.
翻译一下有什么不好的地方帮忙修改下

一个外星人来到了深圳
在2020年，深圳将会变成中国最繁华的城市，有很多人住在深圳，人们每天努力的工作，生活幸福。有一天，天黑了，一个巨大的太空船停在了深圳，一个丑陋的外新人从这个飞船里走了出来，他很高，他在大梅沙游泳，然后他跑到一个动物园里吃了很多动物，然后他跑到帝国大厦造成了那里的恐慌。第二天他就坐着飞船回到他的星球去了。
In 2020 year , Shenzhen will be the busiest city in China. There are lots of people live in Shenzhen . People work hard everyday and live happy lifes.
One day,the sky goes dark.A big spaceship land on Shenzhen. And an ugly alien get out from this spaceship.He is very tall.He swims at DaMeiSha .Then he runs to a ZOO .He eats lots of animal. After that he runs to the Empire State Building . People are frightening there.The next day,he takes his spaceship and goes back to his planet.

你到底要人家翻译还是修改啊~~说清楚了才有人回答

每一句都有大量语法错误。。。。。楼主用Word改好再发一遍问题吧，否则每个词都得改

In 2020 year , Shenzhen will be the best bussy and beatiful city in China. There are lots of people living in Shenzhen . People work hard and happy everyday .
On one day .A big spaceship lands on Shenzhen. A ugly alien get out of the sp