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There are many mountains,river,small gardenand small house there.I'm enjoying nature.I'm going hiking,going fishing,going boating and reading all kinds of books.It makes me relaxing and healthy.

There are many mountains,river,[应该为rivers吧]
small gardenand small house there.[there可去掉]
I'm enjoying nature.[nature前要加the]
I'm going hiking,going fishing,going boating and reading all kinds of books.[个人感觉是不是一般时好点,这个地方不是很清楚怎么改~~]
It makes me relaxing and healthy.[relaxing应为relaxed]

relaxing 改为relaxant,books改为book

在第一句there be句型中:river,small garden 和small house 的数不明确,我不知道它们是单数还是复数.如果是单数请在单词前加上不定冠词 "a";如果是复数请在词尾加"s".
要表达 享受大自然 的意思,需在nature前加 the.
在第三句中,你要描述你现在经常做的事,而不是你此时此刻在做的事,最好用一般现在时,建议改为:I usually go hiking,fishing and boating and do some reading as well.
最后一句中,it指的是什么?它应该指你前面所提到的一系列活动,活动不止一个,所以应把it改为they.还有relaxing是什么意思?建议改为 they make me feel relaxation and health.

第一句后面的名词river,garden house 都应该用复数,最后一句中relaxing应该用relaxed.
翻译:那边有许多的山,河流,花园和房子。我在享受大自然。我想要去爬山,钓鱼,划船,读各种书籍。这样会使我轻松健康。