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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/09/22 18:53:45
Octobor 1 is our National Day, and the Chinese people can enjoy a conventional seven-days holiday. It is usually from 1st to 7th. Particularly, the Mid-autumn Festival, a traditional festival for family reunion, is on October 6th in lunar calendar this year, so most of the students have a good time to go home celebrating this nice festival with their family.

October 1st is our National Day, and the Chinese people can enjoy a conventional seven-day holiday. It is usually from 1st to 7th. Particularly, the Mid-autumn Festival, a traditional festival for family reunion, is on October 6th in lunar calendar this year, so most of the students have a good time going home celebrating this nice festival with their families.

and Chinese people

my persional opinion:
family__should be families

and Chinese people can enjoy a conventional seven-days holiday.

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