UC知道已经写好的英语短文，请帮忙找错误
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Dear Danny,
Thank you for your litter.do you want to know my summer holidays? I planed the sports everyday for holiday. Because I want to become a professional athlete. And I played computer games ,watcheds TVs ,then t studied. AndI helped my parents to do housework.
Thank you for your litter.do you want to know my summer holidays? I planed the sports everyday for holiday. Because I want to become a professional athlete. And I played computer games ,watcheds TVs ,then t studied. AndI helped my parents to do housework.
错误比较多.你是初中生吧,看得出来,还没怎么学英语吧.
Dear Danny,
Thanks for your letter.Do you want to know my summer holiday? I take exercise everyday,Because I want to become a professional athlete.I also played computer games、watched TV and studied.As all children do, I helped my parents to do housework.
大致改了一下，还不错。英语多练就好了.
第一行应是know about my last summer vacation
I played…on holiday.
前面and去掉，加到后面替换then
watched TV…
I studied 最后一句and改成Last（Finally)…
to do the housework
信尾署名例如 Yours,
Mary
Dear Danny
Thanks for your letter.Do you want to know about my summer holidays?
时态太混乱了